Hey 19k54 - the italicized words I see are more than 'slightly bigger,' they are almost twice as big. I don't think the size difference has anything to do with what state one is in, because I'm in Alabama, also! Perhaps it has something to do with what device one is viewing it on. I'm using a Dell laptop. Maybe it looks better on a Kindle?
I have the same problem with my own work I am still editting - many thanks for the honest criticisms.
Now with the sentence quoted it should be....
[i]It was with no small amount of trepidation that Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy learned from his friend Charles Bingley's letter that a murder had been committed at Longbourn. Bingley also requested that he return to Netherfield soon to help deal with this tragedy.[/i]
I have recently setup a text to voice program to read my words back to me. If it sounds slanted, forced, awkward, or just wrong - then it gets modified!
Paragraphs are both indented and have lines between
them. I've always been under the impression it should
be one or the other. Thoughts that are italicized are
a bit larger font size than regular text.
(Italicizing thoughts is perfectly acceptable.)
line spacing is a Kindle feature, as is indent AS LONG AS you don't try to force it.
a NUKE will remove most of these issues but in this case author did TNRoman 14 for main text and Baskerville 18 for italics. KindleGen has done its best and result looks very similar to Word layout with Italics somewhat larger.
I figure this dude Darnly has kinda deep thoughts in this genre and P & P fans expect them big - as I say I a doing a format, not an edit, and the test is to send an azw to author for proof reading and a snagging list if needed back to me to fix any bloopers HE finds.
Same as for cover, HE is paying so HE gets what he wants - ie please don't shoot the messenger.
My issue with the review was things like "whole book is underlined" etc.
OK if he is viewing on an Apple Pie device etc anything might happen - I format for KINDLE and this is a KINDLE forum
Yes you are right the font is up to the writer, NTRoman 14 is good for seniors, howerver the writer made a misstake with the italic 18, they look real bad too me.
indent OR space, one OR the other looks good to me, but the book is readable. I do perfer indents
Yes you are right the font is up to the writer,
NTRoman 14 is good for seniors, howerver the writer
made a misstake with the italic 18, they look real
bad too me.
I think the author was considering that Italics in the APPROVED same size as rest of text TNRoman 12 looks like it is one size smaller when rendered on Kindle and therefore made it bigger.
the fact he also used Baskerville font was not terminal as Kindle ignores all CSS/tags re font type, BUT 2 different font sizes in one para repeated 100 times in book is contrary to Amazon Guide.
But that is normal for a format service, ie you have to deal with all manner of incorrect formatting in Word. Normally a NUKE fixes most if not all problems. IF the author READ the Guide he/she would logically be doing it correct and wouldn't NEED a format service.
So you deal with each book one by one and do your best to get the best result possible.
It would be nice however if the trolls were not waiting to get on your case, but there is a lot of competition with the sharks out there.