I read your book today. I felt for your character. If it's a memoir, I understand it being short and less descriptive. If it's fiction, you need to expand your story and give it more depth. I also would look at the grammar. Other than that, it's pretty good. I think you should take the time to look at grammar, punctuation and expand it.
Yes, I am here. It is actually a memoir. I just used a few different names and I used Iraq as opposed to the Gulf War. Thank you for taking the time to read it. I do have an edited version going through review as we speak.