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June Spears, please come here. It's about your book.
Posted: Jun 18, 2012 6:47 PM
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I read your book today. I felt for your character. If it's a memoir, I understand it being short and less descriptive. If it's fiction, you need to expand your story and give it more depth. I also would look at the grammar. Other than that, it's pretty good. I think you should take the time to look at grammar, punctuation and expand it.
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Re: June Spears, please come here. It's about your book.
Posted: Jun 19, 2012 10:08 AM   in response to: humdedumdedum in response to: humdedumdedum
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June? Are you here?
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Re: June Spears, please come here. It's about your book.
Posted: Jun 20, 2012 11:03 AM   in response to: humdedumdedum in response to: humdedumdedum
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Yes, I am here. It is actually a memoir. I just used a few different names and I used Iraq as opposed to the Gulf War. Thank you for taking the time to read it. I do have an edited version going through review as we speak.
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Re: June Spears, please come here. It's about your book.
Posted: Jun 20, 2012 12:27 PM   in response to: june1781 in response to: june1781
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Sounds good to me.
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Re: June Spears, please come here. It's about your book.
Posted: Jun 20, 2012 3:46 PM   in response to: humdedumdedum in response to: humdedumdedum
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I'm really grateful you stood up for me in the other forum. I've never seen someone get that uptight over another persons work before.

If you still want to trade reviews we can.

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