I haven't done the 'look inside' as I see a few names on here who have already commented who I know to have good heads on their shoulders, so I won't comment on it structurally as you've been given that advice already.
As was pointed out- yes, your cover is incorrectly formatted for an ebook lisiting. Why does it matter? Because it makes you look like a hack. It's about as bad as juts putting up an image with no title or author name. It's amateur, and gives possible readers a bad impression.
You have a 110 page book priced at $9.99. If you fixed the things mentioned above, and priced it competitively at, say, $2.99 or $3.99, you'd most likely get far more sales, and some reviews would follow. Why do you expect folks to pay $10 for a work from an 'unknown' when they can have their pick of other books that interest them for less than half the price? Something to think about...
You'll also find that calling other users on here names is a sure-fire way to need help, ask for it, and find that no one answers you anymore.
You've been extremely disturbed by the criticism you've requested in this forum, so, before I post, I'm going to ask you this: do you or do you not want an honest critique? Before I owned the company I own now, which is an ebook formatting/conversion service, I was a book reviewer for Sphere (fantasy and sci-fi), in the early 90's. So: do you want an honest critique, or are you only interested in hearing what you want to hear? I'll tell you what I think, but I'm not going to do so if you are solely giving lip-service to the idea of honest criticism. I'll warn you in advance: this book needs a ton of work. If you're interested in hearing what I have to say, I'll say it. If not, I won't waste my time. Your choice.
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I read your look inside and liked it, your price is good. And your cover looks good, I don't know about the size is all. I'm not a reviewer and right now don't have time to read much. Every new writer I've seen here get the same treatment you have got. So take it on the chin and just look at your book again and if you feel it is good laugh it off and be happy you can. Mine may not be so good, but their is some who like them and that's all that maters to me.
Agreed. If they don't like the book, they don't and everyone has a different writing style.
Yes I had typos in it, a mistake which I thought I fixed before posting it . But a lot love the story so I'm not taking anything to heart some of these bloggers say.
Not being rude but my answer was answered above. Again there is a difference between criticism and making rude responses.
Problems were fixed and now it's good to go.
Yes you are a professional and know your stuff but I just wanted to tell a story that is a good story.
Criticism is some times bias for it all depends on the audience.
Also if you are going to make a comment such as my book needs tone of work, read it first and then I will respect your opinion but I can't because you have not read it but assume based on a few errors shown in the sample.