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Navneet Anand

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I have published a book of short stories but there is no sale yet
Posted: Oct 2, 2017 5:30 AM
 
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I have published a book of short stories but there is no sale yet in any of the market. My Book is also showing very low on Amazon search. What should I do?
The name of the book is "The String of pearls by Navneet Anand"
What am I doing wrong?
Lexington Alexa...

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Re: I have published a book of short stories but there is no sale yet
Posted: Oct 2, 2017 6:52 AM   in response to: Navneet Anand in response to: Navneet Anand
 
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There are a few problems.

The book cover has no images
The paragraphs are too long (western markets don't like walls of text)
The word "the" is misused or misplaced more than once (for example we don't say "the dusk")
There is no table of contents

But the biggest problem is that the story / stories of the book and genre are not clear. Generic books don't do well in genre fiction markets.
Jane Stowell

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Re: I have published a book of short stories but there is no sale yet
Posted: Oct 2, 2017 8:29 AM   in response to: Lexington Alexa... in response to: Lexington Alexa...
 
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Some really good tips Alexa. Thanks
mrs f collier

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Re: I have published a book of short stories but there is no sale yet
Posted: Oct 2, 2017 12:06 PM   in response to: Navneet Anand in response to: Navneet Anand
 
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You seem to have got your own book title wrong, judging by the look inside? Preals rather than Pearls, which probably doesn't bode well for the rest of the book.
OSMAN AÇIKGÖZ

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Re: I have published a book of short stories but there is no sale yet
Posted: Oct 2, 2017 12:40 PM   in response to: Navneet Anand in response to: Navneet Anand
 
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The same problem happens with my book 'The King's Kumite.' I don't know what the problem really is. I have a good book cover and I have my book edited by an English professional editor. There are still no sales. Sometimes I cannot help thinking if there is a prejudice against my book. Maybe it is because of my name... Maybe I am totally wrong. I don't know... But I strongly believe that people don't see my book. However, I don't give up and keep on the struggle. I believe that God will help me one day.
Lexington Alexa...

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Re: I have published a book of short stories but there is no sale yet
Posted: Oct 2, 2017 2:25 PM   in response to: OSMAN AÇIKGÖZ in response to: OSMAN AÇIKGÖZ
 
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Osman,

The problem is the book. You have a nice cover, but it looks like a romance title for western audiences, and suddenly the main character starts talking about kung fu. It is not clear what the market is nor who the book is for.

The writing is okay, but there are short choppy sentences and you rely too much on narrative summary. Published stories are no longer written like this.

Hope that helps. Authors with foreign names sell lots of books and you can too, but you need to write for the markets which expect specific content.
Mrs Julia Evans

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Re: I have published a book of short stories but there is no sale yet
Posted: Oct 2, 2017 2:25 PM   in response to: OSMAN AÇIKGÖZ in response to: OSMAN AÇIKGÖZ
 
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Osman,

The fact that you've posted the title of your book, I've taken to mean that you've invited feedback. So, here goes...

Firstly, I don't think your name or prejudice have anything to do with your lack of sales.

I had a quick look at the 'Look inside' of your book, and it struck me that I wasn't sure who your target audience is. Are you aiming the book at adults or children?

The reason I ask, is that whilst your translator did a much better job than the majority I've seen, the way it's written still doesn't quite flow naturally. It's as though it was written to be read to a group of young children, using very simple, small words, and short sentences. (I could imagine myself reading it to my kids when they were younger, putting on silly voices for the characters.)

Now, that may be what you intended, as it appears to be a fairy tale of sorts, but if it is, I would make more of the fact that children are your target audience in the blurb.

But if it's aimed at adults, then it doesn't quite hit the mark in the way the sentence structure flows, and, if I'm honest, I would leave it on the shelf as I found the language somewhat jarring and stilted.

The fact that at the moment it doesn't seem to fall into one category or another, might be a reason for no sales. There's no right or wrong direction when it comes to which genre you pick to list it in, as both children's books and adult fantasy are difficult genres to sell your book in. My advice, for what it's worth, is that you need to pick one, as you're obviously not doing very well where you are.

You also might want to take a look at your blurb again, as it comes across as being written by a teenager. Your reference to 'lots of awesome fights' sounds like something my 13 year old would say.

Apologies if my criticism seems harsh. It's intended to be constructive not destructive, as I can tell you've put so much hard work into getting your book published.

Good luck with future sales.

Just my thoughts. J
openhearted

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Re: I have published a book of short stories but there is no sale yet
Posted: Oct 2, 2017 7:39 PM   in response to: Navneet Anand in response to: Navneet Anand
 
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hi

this is a very India book, from what I've seen--and I like that

for me, I need a little breathing room--something more fast moving--take a look at screenwriting--for fast moving dialogue--

the modern world, for all that it has to endure--needs tight ships--well planned adventures

equip yourself thusly

use more dialogue--less narrative--we get exhausted too easily--let your characters speak, and strut about the stage--you'll be surprised what they do

you have outstanding potential

oh
Cynthia E. Gould

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Re: I have published a book of short stories but there is no sale yet
Posted: Oct 2, 2017 8:41 PM   in response to: Navneet Anand in response to: Navneet Anand
 
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How often do you search randomly for books of short stories? How often do you buy books of short stories from unknown authors?
Put yourself in the shoes of the buyers.
kencoon

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Re: I have published a book of short stories but there is no sale yet
Posted: Oct 2, 2017 9:12 PM   in response to: Cynthia E. Gould in response to: Cynthia E. Gould
 
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I don't normally critique books as I am also a fairly new writer.
I downloaded the sample and only made it through a few pages.
The first thing I noticed is there is no copyright page on your book.
The beginning page was rather confusing to me but I may not understand some things.
The first story had the word fishes when you speak of types of fishes. We normally just say types of fish.
It took me a few minutes to realize what hawker is as they don't normally exist in the United States.
Other things that are not common are samosa, and wala. I am still not certain what a wala is.

I also republished one of my books after I read it online. It has not sold anything yet either. Just because you publish a book does not mean it will sell. You also must market it.
You must realize that when you write a book based on your experiences in your country, it may now be understood in another country. There are differences in the way we say things that are different. I know this from experience from traveling and living in a foreign country.
In the United States you can disagree with someone with no consequences. Here you may get shot and killed.
I hope this helps.
As a suggestion I would say, read a lot of English written fiction books. Read some short books on Show vs. Tell. There is a book titled Showing and Telling by Marcy Kennedy that is very good. She has a complete set of books on writing short stories.
The final piece of advice is most important.
Write every day. Write something, even it it is just a paragraph. Write , write,write. That is the only way to get better. You may fail but you will always get better if you don't quit.
Finally, forget the part about your heritage. I never noticed you as foreign until you mentioned it. I read titles, not author names.
Hope this helps.
Ken
Navneet Anand

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Re: I have published a book of short stories but there is no sale yet
Posted: Oct 2, 2017 10:05 PM   in response to: Lexington Alexa... in response to: Lexington Alexa...
 
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Thank you very much Alexander. Will try to work on those.
Navneet Anand

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Re: I have published a book of short stories but there is no sale yet
Posted: Oct 2, 2017 10:11 PM   in response to: kencoon in response to: kencoon
 
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Thank you very much kencoon for your insight. Will try to work on that. I have included all kind of stories in the book i.e every genre. If you will look further you will see that. Thanks for the feedback :)
Navneet Anand

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Re: I have published a book of short stories but there is no sale yet
Posted: Oct 2, 2017 10:13 PM   in response to: Mrs Julia Evans in response to: Mrs Julia Evans
 
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Would like your insight on my book too :) The String of pearls by Navneet Anand
Navneet Anand

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Re: I have published a book of short stories but there is no sale yet
Posted: Oct 2, 2017 10:15 PM   in response to: openhearted in response to: openhearted
 
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I have used dialogue in the following stories increasingly. Thank you very much for your feedback. Much appreciated. Would be grateful if you read more of the book and help me improve. :)
kalle

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Re: I have published a book of short stories but there is no sale yet
Posted: Oct 3, 2017 6:25 AM   in response to: Navneet Anand in response to: Navneet Anand
 
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The book published date is 1st october, and you created this topic 2nd october. Could have waited a few days at least.
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