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BrindleKindle

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Re: I need a Review for "Island of Yoi"
Posted: May 9, 2013 3:25 AM   in response to: Marquis Mills in response to: Marquis Mills
 
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Admit it, you wrote your own 5 star review! In your only review it has the same problem as your posts here, grammatical errors and *a missing word*! Since you say you type too fast and this is your problem, perhaps when you're writing reviews you should slow down a bit.
Marquis Mills

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Re: I need a Review for "Island of Yoi"
Posted: May 9, 2013 5:26 AM   in response to: booknookbiz in response to: booknookbiz
 
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Lol, oops I used a acronym that I and others use in a text message.

The plot is not revealed in the prologue. I laughed when you said that and calling me a "info-dump" is ironic due to that last response you've gave me.

Criticize the plot when you read the book.

Can you give me a summary of the story ?

Can you name one of the continents in my story?

Probably not....

You call my writing confusing but you understand it?

I don't get it that....

Marquis Mills

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Re: I need a Review for "Island of Yoi"
Posted: May 9, 2013 5:26 AM   in response to: booknookbiz in response to: booknookbiz
 
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Lol, oops I used a acronym that I and others use in a text message.

The plot is not revealed in the prologue. I laughed when you said that and calling me a "info-dump" is ironic due to that last response you've gave me.

Criticize the plot when you read the book.

Can you give me a summary of the story ?

Can you name one of the continents in my story?

Probably not....

You call my writing confusing but you understand it?

I don't get it that....

Marquis Mills

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Re: I need a Review for "Island of Yoi"
Posted: May 9, 2013 5:29 AM   in response to: booknookbiz in response to: booknookbiz
 
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Lol, oops I used a acronym that I and others use in a text message.

The plot is not revealed in the prologue. I laughed when you said that and calling me a "info-dump" is ironic due to that last response you've gave me.

Criticize the plot when you read the book.

Can you give me a summary of the story ?

Can you name one of the continents in my story?

Probably not....

You call my writing confusing but you understand it?

I don't get it that....

Marquis Mills

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Re: I need a Review for "Island of Yoi"
Posted: May 9, 2013 5:30 AM   in response to: 1001nightspress in response to: 1001nightspress
 
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Thank you
2davidvandyke

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Re: I need a Review for "Island of Yoi"
Posted: May 9, 2013 6:29 AM   in response to: Marquis Mills in response to: Marquis Mills
 
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First I came on this thread for a review and advice , not for some crazy people hiding behind screen names to talk bad about my writing when u haven't read the entir story. Yes I made few typos but I fixed them and waiting for it to post. And don't sit here and questioned my native language you rude bastard. People now of these days...

Hahahahah screen names? Here's my author page. http://www.amazon.com/David-VanDyke/e/B008EZHPC4/ref=ntt_athr_dp_pel_1

You'll notice the name on your screen is the same as the name on my books, except for the "2" because someone else has registered the name without the number. I'm not hiding.

I did not need to read the "entir" story to see it needs work. You asked for feedback, you got it. And the question about your native language was meant kindly, though now you have forfeited all kindness. If English is your native language, then you really need to look for another line of work.

Booknookbiz and others: Pearls before swine, baby.

Msgris

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Re: I need a Review for "Island of Yoi"
Posted: May 9, 2013 8:16 AM   in response to: Marquis Mills in response to: Marquis Mills
 
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Go on, admit it, your really Andy Kauffman! This is really just some great big spoof that's heralding your return. You are pure gold LOL!!!!
1001nightspress

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Re: I need a Review for "Island of Yoi"
Posted: May 9, 2013 8:24 AM   in response to: booknookbiz in response to: booknookbiz
 
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Hitch, 'twas I, but I'm sure she'd share my sentiments.

You can't help people who aren't open to being helped. cf. Dorothy Parker on horticulture.
Msgris

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Re: I need a Review for "Island of Yoi"
Posted: May 9, 2013 8:47 AM   in response to: Marquis Mills in response to: Marquis Mills
 
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Congratulations your second review, or should I say, the first review you haven't written yourself, should appear on Amazon any time now. Congratulations, you got what you wished for xxxx
Marquis Mills

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Re: I need a Review for "Island of Yoi"
Posted: May 9, 2013 9:26 AM   in response to: Msgris in response to: Msgris
 
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Wow You guys are really wrong about everything.

Why I even bothered to post on here...

Peter, there is nothing sensitive about me at all. What you perceive is not even close...LOL

Oh and the review is actually from a real person and not me...........
Msgris

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Re: I need a Review for "Island of Yoi"
Posted: May 9, 2013 9:30 AM   in response to: Marquis Mills in response to: Marquis Mills
 
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You asked for a review, now you've got one on, now go away!

Edited by: Msgris on May 9, 2013 9:30 AM
crazywriterlady

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Re: I need a Review for "Island of Yoi"
Posted: May 9, 2013 10:13 AM   in response to: 2davidvandyke in response to: 2davidvandyke
 
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Funny how the sarcasm went totally over his head.

OP, it's not very nice to criticize authors who are actually selling books (and I can attest that David's are good ones), when they try to provide the review you asked for.

We are professionals here, and we like to see others behave in a like manner, which means proper spelling, punctuation and word usage. This is not a situation where text-speech is appropriate.

Now, I'm going to put on my fire-proof suit, cause I know I'm going to get flamed.
Marquis Mills

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Re: I need a Review for "Island of Yoi"
Posted: May 9, 2013 11:20 AM   in response to: Msgris in response to: Msgris
 
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I find that funny when you're in my thread telling me to go away.

Hehe..... You're so arrogant...all of you except for those and they know who they are. You all are the same, fueled with too much power and pride, quick to label something without really understanding. Conservative, you guys really are and nothing else. It was clear to me when I read and analyzed each response way before for those who know who they are.

Get a life and stop posting here....I would rather read chicken scratch then read each post.

Do you guys complain all the time because from what I read, you guys and again not all, must have boring lives. You guys are probably envious of the authors that actually became successful while on the other hand, you guys did not. Don't talk foolishness until you have a movie or over 100 reviews.

Maybe then I might take you all more serious.

gldrummond

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Re: I need a Review for "Island of Yoi"
Posted: May 9, 2013 11:30 AM   in response to: Marquis Mills in response to: Marquis Mills
 
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You (general "you") don't have to have 100 reviews and a movie made from one of your books in order to know how to write a coherent sentence.

My 14-year-old daughter is able to write coherent sentences. :)
Marquis Mills

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Re: I need a Review for "Island of Yoi"
Posted: May 9, 2013 11:32 AM   in response to: crazywriterlady in response to: crazywriterlady
 
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"We are professionals here, and we like to see others behave in a like manner, which means proper spelling, punctuation and word usage. This is not a situation where text-speech is appropriate."

I have not,except for one, have seen anything professional.

Do you guys really know the definitions of some of the words you use.

So called experience authors who bicker. Get out of the "Narcissistic state" and come back to reality.

By the way tell me how you felt when your first book was not what you hoped for it to be?

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